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FIC: My Fair Liar - Part 5
Title: My Fair Liar
Author: Jalabert
Email: jalabert@hotitudinosity.com
Website: www.hotitudinosity.com
Rating: PG-13, for language
Pairings: Ford/McKay
Category: First time
Summary: Rodney McKay learns the meaning of "Go with The Flow" when he hatches a scheme to transform a diamond in the rough.
Written for the reel_sga challenge.

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dossier From: dossier Date: June 17th, 2006 10:18 pm (UTC) (Link)
I love it! My Fair Lady is one of my favorite films, and you've completely made it your own with a wonderful twist and excellent characterizations. great story, and I'm impressed--you have your own song lyrics!
jalabert From: jalabert Date: June 18th, 2006 02:03 am (UTC) (Link)
The moment I saw the title on the list of prompts I grabbed it. Ten minutes later I had the story written in my head. The lyrics were the last thing I wrote and they were probably the hardest part of the story.

I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
morena_donn From: morena_donn Date: June 18th, 2006 07:04 pm (UTC) (Link)
Finally had time to read this (your fics are just to good to be rushed). Wonderful job. That's the best AU Bates I've ever read. You captured his personality perfectly, and gave him a reason for his behavior.

Can't wait to see what you come up with next *g*
jalabert From: jalabert Date: June 19th, 2006 12:28 pm (UTC) (Link)
I'm so glad you enjoyed this. I thought it was a real hoot, myself. I saved a special place for Bates in this story; his role was pivotal and I'm glad you appreciate his character.

My next feature story will also be an AU (says it to herself again: no more challenges!). I hope you find equally entertaining.
purna From: purna Date: June 20th, 2006 10:41 pm (UTC) (Link)
I wouldn't have thought I'd like this pairing (I'm such McKay/Sheppard girl), but this was very cool. It made me miss Ford. Thanks for sharing!
jalabert From: jalabert Date: June 20th, 2006 11:17 pm (UTC) (Link)
Thanks for taking a chance on my story! So glad you enjoyed it.

I miss Aiden, too, which is why I write about him. :(
not_mandroid From: not_mandroid Date: June 27th, 2007 01:12 pm (UTC) (Link)
This is so, so good! Why aren't more people commend on this, I wouldn't know.

Aiden and Rodney as a pair is cuter than I thought. Again, this is really good. :D

...Is it weird that I think Radek is the most adorable person in this story? *giggles*
jalabert From: jalabert Date: June 27th, 2007 11:32 pm (UTC) (Link)
Thank you!

This story was so much fun to write and I had a ball writing Radek as a completely over the top character who steals every scene he's in. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
darkrosetiger From: darkrosetiger Date: July 16th, 2007 08:30 am (UTC) (Link)
Found this via the link on fanficofcolor, and loved it! Rodney and Ford worked together, but more importantly, everyone felt genuine. I was especially fond of Ronon and Radek (and was it just me, or was there something sparking between them?). And Bates? Was absolutely perfect. Definitely one for the bookmarks.
jalabert From: jalabert Date: July 16th, 2007 12:46 pm (UTC) (Link)
Thank you so much! I am especially proud of this piece and thought it was a good story to post on fanficofcolor. I had a ball with Radek, and yes, I let him have a flirtation with Ronon (who could stop him?). Bates was a very important character in this story. I'm glad he found an appreciative audience. Thank you!
angiepen From: angiepen Date: July 16th, 2007 08:02 pm (UTC) (Link)
This was a great story. :D I loved how complex Aidan was and how Rodney was an obnoxious jerk but he got better -- not completely 'cause then he wouldn't be Rodney but just enough better -- and everything worked out. And Radek was a crack-up! Excellent job!

Angie
jalabert From: jalabert Date: July 17th, 2007 12:13 am (UTC) (Link)
So glad you enjoyed it!
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jalabert From: jalabert Date: June 4th, 2008 03:39 pm (UTC) (Link)
Thank you! I really enjoyed writing this story and went totally over the top with Radek's character. I couldn't resist that one last scene.

I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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