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FIC: The Other - Part 7 - Hotitudinosity
fiction by jalabert
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FIC: The Other - Part 7
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huntertp3 From: huntertp3 Date: April 11th, 2007 11:26 pm (UTC) (Link)
I continue to be an enthustiastic fan of this story. The way everything flows from one scene to the next is wonderful. I think I may love Beta. I'm not sure if it's the snarkiness,the defiance,the sadness or a combination of all three. I think you do a wonderful job of writing the relationships in this story. Romantic or otherwise.Aiden/Rodney,Aiden/John and especially Beta/Carson. I really like that you have Carson interested in Beta because he wants to know about him,and not just because he's Aiden's duplicate. And of course that last scene made me insanely happy.

Aiden/Beta rivarly is Love.

Amazing Job.
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