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FIC: Constancy - Hotitudinosity
fiction by jalabert
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FIC: Constancy
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hsapiens From: hsapiens Date: July 6th, 2007 02:16 pm (UTC) (Link)
How in the world did I miss this story of yours?!? *sigh* And what a doozy - I love your Aiden voice and here it is in 1st person! I'm a sucker for well-written 1st person.

You really make me ache for Aiden. I've read enough slash now that the "don't want to say anything for fear of losing the friendship" has become a trite thing; a phrase that gets trotted out and is then abandoned for the joy of bringing the guys together and having lots of porn. (Not that I'm complaining about the porn, obviously.) You've rescued it, bringing it back to being something real, fresh, and alive with the palpable fear of consequences, in a poignant and touching way. Poor, poor Aiden. *sniffle* I know you labeled this with John/Aiden but I really like how you've written John in a way that could be interpreted as either interested in a relationship or as interested in his friend and teammate. As the reader, I don't know any more than Aiden does and I love that tension.

Will there be a sequel of any kind in the offing?
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