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FIC: Between the Devil and the Deep Blue Sea - Part 2/2 - Hotitudinosity
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FIC: Between the Devil and the Deep Blue Sea - Part 2/2
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slash_rulez From: slash_rulez Date: October 9th, 2007 04:38 pm (UTC) (Link)

The Devil and the Deep Blue Sea

OMG!!! I loved it... it was so sweet

“Just remember that I'm carrying a gun, here,” he said softly. The twinkle in his eye made Sheldon realize that Don was flirting. He smiled and considered his words carefully, hoping that he wasn't blushing like a schoolgirl.

God, u just gotta love Don! This was def my favourite bit, made me all giggly.

Unfortunately i like really corny ending where people declare their undying love for each other at least once every 500 words, so I was hoping for a different ending. But the story made me happy!

And it's very well written, so I really hope to read something from u again soon!

XXX
jalabert From: jalabert Date: October 9th, 2007 05:43 pm (UTC) (Link)

Re: The Devil and the Deep Blue Sea

Thank you for your kind words. I haven't looked at this story in a while and actually had to go back and reread a bit to recall where that line came from. I rarely go the for all out "I love you" scenario, so I'm sorry to disappoint (I just don't believe that men work that way--and most of my male friends admit that I'm right), but it does end with potential for more.

I have written more of this pair--I even posted a ficlet yesterday here. And there are more in the works. Stay tuned!
slash_rulez From: slash_rulez Date: October 9th, 2007 09:58 pm (UTC) (Link)

Re: The Devil and the Deep Blue Sea

Its just that Don seemed to be pretty much in love with Hawkes, so I had hope!!! But I wasnt disappointed at all, I still loved the storyline and especially the writing...

There is def not enough Hawkes/Flack out there!

I'm still pretty new to the whole livejournal experience, but i'll def check for new fics from you!
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