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FIC: Between the Devil and the Deep Blue Sea - Part 2/2 - Hotitudinosity
fiction by jalabert
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FIC: Between the Devil and the Deep Blue Sea - Part 2/2
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carinascott From: carinascott Date: November 5th, 2008 09:19 am (UTC) (Link)
I really liked this. Your character voices are dead on. And the best part about this fic, is that while it is sappy at points, angsty at others, its very REAL. The emotions come across as very genuine, the dialogue is great (love the back and forth between Don and Sheldon); that is hard to pull off. So, great job and I hope you plan to write more Flack/Hawkes fics. Thanks for sharing!

-Carina
jalabert From: jalabert Date: November 5th, 2008 01:39 pm (UTC) (Link)
Thank you. I really enjoyed writing this and it was very important to me to make the voices ring true.

I'm very amused that you've commented on two stories referring to them as sappy. I readily own up to the charge. I think that deep underneath my stoic exterior lies the heart of a true romantic and it tends to show in my fic.
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