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FIC: We Both Know - Hotitudinosity
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FIC: We Both Know
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nonemohead From: nonemohead Date: December 21st, 2008 07:05 am (UTC) (Link)
I'm back! I didn't forget my promise of reviewing this fic. I just didn't realize that I would have limit internet access when I came home. I will finish reviewing this series before school starts back up, and hopefully they'll be a new chapter before then. *bats eyelashes* Anyway, here goes my fangirl ramblings:

"How do you guys, you know--." Troy shrugged. "I've always wondered how you guys seem to know who's gay and who isn't." Chad just blinked at him. "What do they call it, gaydar?"

I totally laughed out loud during this part. Well, I pretty much laughed out loud at every part. heh.

It's amazing that no matter how many times I reread this, I still laugh like an idiot. I'm sitting here with a big grin that's causing my face to hurt.

I love how Chad is so uncomfortable with his hotness. He's so adorable, him and Ryan. When they fed each other on the couch, I almost melted with happiness and fangirl squiggles (if that is even a word...lol).

Ryan's jealously, Troy trying to help Chad get some, and Chad's parents are all just some of the reasons (besides the awesome author) why this chapter is so wonderful!

I feel like I'm gushing. But hey you deserve it!
jalabert From: jalabert Date: December 21st, 2008 04:05 pm (UTC) (Link)
I'm glad you enjoyed it! And I love it when people review my older stuff. It makes me go back a rediscover my work from a different perspective. A story looks very different when one is in the middle of writing it. But enough about me...

I love Ryan in this story, as he simultaneously woos Chad and preps him for another man. And Chad just stubbornly digs in and decided that Ryan's the one, no matter what Ryan thinks. And the parents... Chad's parents rock. ;)

Thank you!
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