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FIC: Suspicions - Hotitudinosity
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FIC: Suspicions
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elvensorceress From: elvensorceress Date: March 11th, 2008 06:12 pm (UTC) (Link)
Awwwwwwwwwwww. Gosh. I love your stories. Your Troy in particular is absolutely amazing. I adore him. But oh goodness, all through the beginning I was going, "Troy, bb, you're thinking too hard. Leave that to the experts."

I just don't even know what to say about the Chad/Ryan in this. OH. MY. HEART. It was so sweet and sexy and gorgeous and it just turned me in to a big pile of gooooo.

Besides that (and all the sweet little touches they were sharing) I adored the Chad-Troy friendship in this. I think Chad would SO pull something like that if he thought he was losing Troy. And I just really hope that Ryan never thinks of leaving him. I think the poor guy would just fall apart :(

Anyway. This was gorgeous and amazing. Definitely one of my favorites of all your stories. Which says a lot ;)

Much love, sweetie!
<3
jalabert From: jalabert Date: March 13th, 2008 11:53 pm (UTC) (Link)
Eep! I just realized that I never responded to this.

I have come to realize that I enjoy writing Troy and have been trying to flesh out his character. It's fun, especially when I find myself laughing--I occasionally think of him singing Bet on Me and it's a nearly Pavlovian response. ;)

I've decided to write these stories smut-free, at least for now, so I'm leaving it to others to decide how intimate they want Chad and Ryan's relationship to be. I know in my mind where they are, but that's not important. Others write smut far better than I do and I find I'm more interested in the romance than the sex, anyway. I do know they are intimate (emotionally) and that began before they started dating, so they way I see it, they're expressing a lot of previously repressed emotion (and things they can't express around others).

I'm so glad you enjoyed this. I value your opinion highly and I wish I could read this they way you do--I lack distance. Anyway, I'm going to continue exploring these important relationships between Chad and Ryan and Chad and Troy in this second series.

Thank you for your beautiful comments! <3<3<3
elvensorceress From: elvensorceress Date: March 14th, 2008 12:17 am (UTC) (Link)
Gosh, I do that all the time :( It's sad. I try to reply to everything and it just doesn't work some times. Anyway.

I really love your Troy (I'm in the middle of reading your new story right now) and he makes me so happy. I really like him as a character and I kinda wrote him into a corner in my series which makes me sad because he's such fun. BET ON ME Heeeeeee.

I like the leaving it up to the imagination. But the touches and emotional intimacy you do write is just phenomenal. I will probably say something about it when I comment on your new story, but really. I ADORE how you've written this connection that they have. It's gorgeous. I'm more interested in the romance/relationship side of things, too. Even though I do write porn and actually plan to write a series with a lot of it. But more because I want to explore them having that kind of relationship first and then figuring out there's more to it.

I value yours, too :) And I so get needing the distance. I wish I could read Boy Disease the way everyone who is not me can. But then again, I also get to call the shots. So. You know. :)

I'm loving your stories. The Ryan-Chad-Troy relationships are so deep and interesting and you do such justice to them. It makes me so happy to read them.

Thank YOU for your beautiful stories!
xoxoxox

eta: my gosh I cannot type today! *facepalm* Sorry, bb.

Edited at 2008-03-14 12:22 am (UTC)
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