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FIC: Exposure - Hotitudinosity
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FIC: Exposure
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elvensorceress From: elvensorceress Date: March 14th, 2008 12:50 am (UTC) (Link)
Oh, goodness! I'm laughing so hard I don't even know what to say.

So, the beginning was so cute and sweet and like I said before, this connection you write between Chad and Ryan is just gorgeous and downright magical. There's such intimacy and adoration between both of them. And I just get gooey when I read it.

But he silently vowed to someday acquire the Ultimate Gay Sex Guide and show it to Troy no matter what it cost or how much it squicked his dad.
OMG What I wouldn't give to see that. Poor Troy.

So, when Brent showed up, I gasped and went OMG! It's just so perfect.

"Calm down," Chad said. "And lower your voice. Look, we've got to spend a few hours with this loser. We can deal, right?"
"Right," Troy said doubtfully. Chad glared at him. "Right," Troy repeated firmly. He grasped Chad's arm. "I've got your back."

You know I love all your Chad-Troy friendship, but this in particular stuck out. It's just so them and says so much about how much they care for one another and know each other the way only best friends can. ♥

"Not for me," Chad said shaking his head. "I'm hoping to go to New Jersey." Troy shot him a look.
EEEEHEHEHEHEHHHEHEHE!!! Sorry. So, that has to be one of my favorite Chad moments ever. So perfect. Love love love it.

"Hey, cutie," Chad said softly, bringing a smile to Ryan's face.
Pardon me while I melt into a puddle.

"You know," Ryan said, after he took a second to recover his power of speech. "He's a lot more complicated than I generally give him credit for."
"Welcome to my life," Chad replied, nodding.

*giggles forever* Seriously. I just can't even say anything. :)

I loved that Troy stepped in to do the sunscreen. Heee. And that Brent thought he wanted Chad. *giggles*

This was awesome, honey. And such fun to read :)

Love!

Edited at 2008-03-14 12:51 am (UTC)
jalabert From: jalabert Date: March 14th, 2008 01:28 am (UTC) (Link)
Perfect icon!

Why yes, it IS a comedy. I laughed myself silly writing it. It was a really fast write (20 pages in less than 24 hours) because I couldn't stop once I started. And I edited it on a New York City subway where, fortunately, no one pays a laughing woman any attention.

I love the absurdity of Brent showing up and Troy taking the offensive while Ryan just kicks back and waits for the day to be over. As this series explores Chad and Troy's relationship as well as Chad and Ryan's, I suppose Ryan's getting a bit of an education about Troy, too. Bet on it!

Hee! <3<3<3

Oh: You were saying that Boy Disease was getting long. When I printed it out to read I found that it was upwards of 160 pages (I saved a tree and did two pages a sheet). So, yeah. BIG. With this story, my series is up to 118.

Edited at 2008-03-14 01:31 am (UTC)
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