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FIC: Exposure - Hotitudinosity
fiction by jalabert
FIC: Exposure
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pinkielephant From: pinkielephant Date: March 14th, 2008 02:56 am (UTC) (Link)
Uhm.. Supah long review, I apologize. Its mainly on a wee little theory of mine.

"You know," Troy repeated, glancing around furtively. Chad made a show of looking around, before he resumed staring. "The gay thing," Troy whispered.
Hee... the looking around part was classic. Also, step 1 of the gay process: DENIAL!

Troy gave a little squeal and ran off to get Gabriella.
... And we're positive Troy isn't gay??

"Kiss, kiss! You look fabulous! New shoes? Those earrings are so you,"
"Has everyone lost his ability to speak plain English today?"

You've got this dialogue thing down pat. You're so in character all the time, and it's so wonderfully witty!

"It's hard to describe. The word that comes to mind--." He shrugged awkwardly. "You looked radiant."
No, seriously, we're positive Troy isn't gay?

In fact, Troy couldn't seem to take his eyes off him, in spite of the fact that Troy was sitting beside a gorgeous brunette.
I don't care if its out of context. I have a conspiracy theory and I'm keeping at it.

"You know, you really ought to reconsider and apply to U of A. You'd find a lot to like there."

"Yeah," Troy said. "I'll be there."

Poor Troy. So in luvs.

"He's a loser and if he sticks around he'll just try to use her to get close to Chad." Ryan looked at him oddly. "What?" Troy said. "Doesn't it bother you that this Brent guy wants your boyfriend?"

"I think I might be a bit more disturbed about how much it bothers you,"

Ryan has a finely tuned Gaydar.

He dropped his pants as Ryan shook his head. But Troy never noticed. As soon as Chad's jeans began to fall, he grabbed his suit and fled to the bathroom.


I've got it, dude," Troy said before Chad could answer. He'd been slathering himself with lotion and came over, prepared to do Chad's back.

Wanting to touch Chad all over...

"Looking who's calling the kettle black," Brent sneered. "You've been checking him out all afternoon!"

"He's my best friend! I've been worried about him," Troy snarled.

"Yeah, because he's obviously sick and in need of your attention," Brent spat back. "Try again, Golden Boy! You're so delusional you can't even admit you're--."

Maybe I'm not so perceptive. It seems like you've planned this all out from the beginning.
jalabert From: jalabert Date: March 14th, 2008 04:39 pm (UTC) (Link)

There's just enough fact there to make a compelling argument... But no; I had no big gay agenda. Well, I had no agenda other than to make Troy's behavior suspicious enough to trigger Brent's gaydar (and Ryan's--hee!). Troy had better stay straight--Gabriella is his best chance of getting laid. ;)

Thanks for the comment! :)
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