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FIC: Payback (Porn Battle Entry) - Hotitudinosity
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FIC: Payback (Porn Battle Entry)
Title: Payback
Author: Jalabert
Rating: FRT/Mature
Summary: Turnabout is fair play. (Sequel to Bitten)

Turnabout is fair play, but there was nothing fair about the way Ryan dragged Chad into the men's room at the back of the store, grabbed him by the hair and kissed him hard. Chad flailed for a moment before he found his bearings. That was precisely what Ryan wanted; there was no point in trying to outmuscle his partner. Ryan knew that if he were patient, Chad would become putty in his hands. He even let Chad take control momentarily, deepening the kiss with mounting urgency. As soon as he had Chad precisely where he wanted him, Ryan abruptly pulled his mouth away, yanked on Chad's hair again to expose his throat and slowly licked a line along his jaw. Chad shuddered and tried to reciprocate, but Ryan pinned him to the wall with a knee pressed between his legs. Chad could only hold on for dear life as Ryan sucked on Chad's sweet spot and was immediately rewarded with a commensurate hardening in Chad's groin. Ryan inwardly gloated and continued to work his lover into a frenzy with only his tongue and right thigh, which he slid slowly and firmly against Chad's denim-clad erection.

Ryan used his free hand to tear at the neckline of Chad's tee shirt to get at more skin. He licked, nibbled, sucked, and kissed a trail from Chad's clavicle up to his ear and back again, listening for the subtle change in Chad's breathing that signaled an imminent explosion. That's when Ryan pulled away again, grinning evilly when Chad grabbed him by the arms and forced him to finish what he'd begun. Ryan didn't disappoint. He kissed Chad deeply, entangling his fingers in Chad's hair once more as he applied just enough pressure with his hips to send Chad over the edge.

Ryan stood back to admire his handiwork. Chad looked utterly debauched--his hair was wildly askew, his lips red and swollen, his breathing ragged, and his neck a mess of red welts. Ryan smiled smugly when he saw the telltale darkness spreading across the crotch of Chad's jeans.

"Too easy," he muttered as he unlocked the door and slipped out of the restroom, fully aware that Chad was incapable of speech, much less following him. "I'll be in the car."

He ambled over to the counter, pausing on the way to pick out a shirt for Chad to replace the one he'd just ruined. Chad's walk of shame would be very brief and on friendly ground. Neither teen was a stranger to the owner of Ryan's favorite boutique.

"He'll be out in a second," Ryan said easily as he placed the polo shirt on top of the one he'd picked out earlier and threw down a charge card. The owner rang up the sale, idly glancing at the hand-shaped bruise on Ryan's forearm.

"If he doesn't come out on his own, I'm locking him in there and claiming salvage rights," he quipped. Ryan met his eyes and raised a single eyebrow in challenge. The owner winked and handed him the shopping bag.

Ryan walked out to his car and tossed the bag onto the back seat. He knew he was going to pay dearly for what he'd done. Payback was a bitch. Ryan smiled and put on his sunglasses. He rather enjoyed being Chad's bitch.

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legal_prose From: legal_prose Date: January 28th, 2009 02:12 pm (UTC) (Link)
Am I first to comment? Wow! Yay!! It's a good day (so far)!!

How could I not love that? I did! It was ... steamy. And I could actually visualize it. *smirk* It's what's going to get me through my day.

*hugs!*
jalabert From: jalabert Date: January 29th, 2009 02:16 am (UTC) (Link)
Ryan's such a naughty. Debauching Chad is how he gets through his day. ;)

*hugs you back*
mulder200 From: mulder200 Date: January 28th, 2009 07:35 pm (UTC) (Link)
Oh my! That was both hot and quite dirty. I am very pleased.
jalabert From: jalabert Date: January 29th, 2009 02:17 am (UTC) (Link)
So yesterday I was a perv and today that's a good thing? ;)

Yeah--I can see that.
lemon31 From: lemon31 Date: January 28th, 2009 10:13 pm (UTC) (Link)
*swoons*

A perfect Porn Battle Entry; steamy, fast and goddamnit Ryan's in control again.

Lovely images for a horrible evening, thank you!
jalabert From: jalabert Date: January 29th, 2009 02:18 am (UTC) (Link)
That was Ryan's strategy--fast and hot and totally in charge.

Thank you!
lil_1337 From: lil_1337 Date: January 29th, 2009 01:02 am (UTC) (Link)
I doubt Chad is going to feel too abused though I have no doubt he'll claim payback either.

Love the line about claiming salvage rights.
jalabert From: jalabert Date: January 29th, 2009 02:20 am (UTC) (Link)
Chad's too shocked to feel too much of anything beyond "sated" for quite a while. And yeah, he'll be looking for payback as soon as he learns to breath again.

I crack myself up with lines like that. ;)

Thanks, honey!
nonemohead From: nonemohead Date: January 29th, 2009 04:12 am (UTC) (Link)
Oh, wow.

That. Was. Hot.

I usually don't read pure Chyan smut but I'm quickly changing my mind, especially when you're the one writing it. :)

Too easy
Lol. Best line ever. That needs to be on an icon!
jalabert From: jalabert Date: January 29th, 2009 02:20 pm (UTC) (Link)
I've never written pure Chyan smut--I've never thought explicit sex was necessary to tell their story--but this was for a challenge. And writing smutty Chyan is dangerously addicting. I'm glad the challenge ends in a few days.

And yes. That does demand an icon. Thank you!
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jalabert From: jalabert Date: January 29th, 2009 02:31 pm (UTC) (Link)
We just know he's not thinking of selling Chad for scrap, either. ;)

I'm all about the peripherals when it comes to writing sex. The mechanics are, well, mechanical, so foreplay and afterplay generally hold more interest for me, so we probably share that kink. *waggles eyebrows*

Glad you enjoyed it!
allyndra From: allyndra Date: February 2nd, 2009 07:10 am (UTC) (Link)
Bwahahahaha! This is really cool, but my favorite part is the store owner claiming slavage rights. :o)

Very hot, and very fun!
jalabert From: jalabert Date: February 3rd, 2009 03:08 am (UTC) (Link)
It occurred to me after writing this that Ryan must have done this before. I bet that shop owner has been eyeing Chad for a while... ;)

Glad you enjoyed it!
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